tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6706926619305473112.comments2010-03-31T17:02:50.218-07:00Tina T.http://www.blogger.com/profile/13354269888079129610noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6706926619305473112.post-13452853555900465652010-03-31T17:02:50.211-07:002010-03-31T17:02:50.211-07:00Yay! So glad to read more. You write with enough intrigue that I want to keep going - I want to find out about that lunch!<br /><br />parenting ad absurdumJack and Alex Manninghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12678665276699343565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6706926619305473112.post-38404221675042662782010-03-22T09:59:07.120-07:002010-03-22T09:59:07.120-07:00Oh yay!! So happy to read more of your story. It&#39;s really very good, intriguing and suspenseful, and I hope you will post more soon.<br /><br />Peryl (parenting ad absurdum)Jack and Alex Manninghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12678665276699343565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6706926619305473112.post-91365730816757557972010-03-20T06:09:25.994-07:002010-03-20T06:09:25.994-07:00I really like this - it&#39;s making me want more and the character is so relate-able!<br />SwatiSwatihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03741991951693505652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6706926619305473112.post-49774232208657537232010-03-20T06:06:52.125-07:002010-03-20T06:06:52.125-07:00I just love a good story that pulls you in.<br /><br />So glad to have you as a member of our Aspiring Writer&#39;s Club over at Mom Bloggers Club.Is Dis Normal or Dysfunctional?http://www.blogger.com/profile/06947784606220533297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6706926619305473112.post-21700475126811689692010-03-20T01:24:18.607-07:002010-03-20T01:24:18.607-07:00Hi! Found your blog as I was hopping about on Follow Friday. Hey, I think your kids book ideas are great! I LOVE your idea about the story go round...I&#39;m gonna do that with my three. Thanks!Absolutely Positivehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05412746624444394801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6706926619305473112.post-32498646929565708102010-03-12T23:25:37.059-08:002010-03-12T23:25:37.059-08:00Thank you all for the encouraging comments! I will be writing some more tomorrow!Part-Time Couponinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13354269888079129610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6706926619305473112.post-7550816041174854922010-03-12T10:30:57.726-08:002010-03-12T10:30:57.726-08:00Waiting for more... more please?<br /><br /><br />Peryl <br />http://blog.seattlepi.com/parentingadabsurdum/Jack and Alex Manninghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12678665276699343565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6706926619305473112.post-38939026158024702942010-03-12T10:26:06.395-08:002010-03-12T10:26:06.395-08:00I really like the mix of &quot;what&#39;s going to happen next?&quot; with a character who is a little unsure of herself with humor! it&#39;s fun, mysterious, and as a girlie girl, I cannot resist the piercing green eyes...:-)!<br /><br />Can&#39;t wait for more!<br />SwatiSwatihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03741991951693505652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6706926619305473112.post-7492250742408861252010-03-09T17:44:15.511-08:002010-03-09T17:44:15.511-08:00Hello! Visiting from Aspiring Writers at MBC. I think this is great! You definitely left me wanting more. Keep on writing!<br /><br />Heather<br />http://militaryspouserollercoasterride.blogspot.com/Riding the Roller Coasterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15183668808628272381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6706926619305473112.post-29146337227556462252010-03-09T13:30:49.155-08:002010-03-09T13:30:49.155-08:00Another great clip. Now I want to know what happens! :)Chrishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15431630558670582398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6706926619305473112.post-45330557202658521052010-03-08T21:24:56.965-08:002010-03-08T21:24:56.965-08:00Hi! Just checking out your story from MBC - I think this is very good! I&#39;m a mystery fanatic, and you caught my attention and left me wanting to know more. A little dark, mysterious, but also funny. Please keep me posted on the next instalment!<br /><br />Peryl (I&#39;m here: http://blog.seattlepi.com/parentingadabsurdum - the login is an old blog and I haven&#39;t figured out how to change it yet :)).Jack and Alex Manninghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12678665276699343565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6706926619305473112.post-61457462192737449122010-03-02T12:57:01.965-08:002010-03-02T12:57:01.965-08:00Hi Tina: Oh, I can feel the suspense in the synopsis; I&#39;ve always wondered if mystery writers can creep themselves out writing the stuff?! :-) You&#39;ll have to let me know!! Looking forward to reading all of your stories.<br />SwatiSwatihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03741991951693505652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6706926619305473112.post-50325488694786953122010-02-24T13:36:06.934-08:002010-02-24T13:36:06.934-08:00I&#39;m really enjoying your writing and I love the look of your blog. <br /><br />Please check out my site because I have something for you.<br /><br />http://letsconnectwithnature.blogspot.com/p/awards.html<br /><br />ChrisChrishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15431630558670582398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6706926619305473112.post-9862992933102269592010-02-23T08:29:01.419-08:002010-02-23T08:29:01.419-08:00I think this is a great story line for a book. I really enjoyed what you had posted here. I also liked the intro to the vampire story (even though I haven&#39;t jumped on the vampire bandwagon yet). I&#39;m looking forward to reading more of your stuff.<br /><br />Following from MBC.<br />Chris<br />Stop by my blog at:<br />http://letsconnectwithnature.blogspot.com/Chrishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15431630558670582398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6706926619305473112.post-42219407441324402492010-02-23T08:18:19.950-08:002010-02-23T08:18:19.950-08:00Hi - don&#39;t be put off by stories that exist - there are now several different stories about kids going off to Magicians school like Harry Potter! I say go for it...I read an online book proposal in development - kind of what you are doing with posting at the blog. the author is literally writing his proposal before our eyes. I think it was the Secada Project. It&#39;s was really interesting to see him develop his characters.<br />Swati<br />(from aspiring writers)Swatihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03741991951693505652noreply@blogger.com